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Overall a nice short story. There were a fair amount of grammar issues (punctuation with dialogue mostly), but if you wanted to know the story then you can look past those and just enjoy what's written. There were anime influences (blue hair) but I like those personally and didn't have much of a problem with them.

As far as it being a story about paintball, that was a nice direction to take. It make the story lighter and more fun than the kind of end of the world stories that seem to appear far more often.

Overall a good job :)
My first story, a gothic romance novelette titled Larkspur, has been published! The preview is up here on dA :D It is 99cents on Amazon if you would like to buy the whole thing, and given that it has a 4.5 average, I'd say it's worth it!
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“I like my fiction dark, and V.M. Jaskiernia knows how to deliver. Her approach to necromancy was fresh and alluring, the story was fluid, and I was full immersed in the world V.M. created from the first page.”
“Larkspur is a simple, beautiful, and slightly twisted love story. My imagination came to life with the images that Jaskiernia created. The author has a way with words that I am excited to see expanded upon in the sequel.”
“Necromancers are cool, and in this book, they are even cooler.”


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Ivanssj4 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Happy b-day! :)
Negatic Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Professional
Thank you very much for the fav :heart:
princesswanderer Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks for the favorite! C: I am going to read your promo in a bit!
fictograph Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thanks for the fave on my Game of Thrones artwork! [link]

I’m working on some more. It’s my absolute favorite series on TV right now. Who’s your favorite character? I love Ygritte and Daenerys.
VMJ Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Professional Writer
You're very welcome!

Game of Thrones is one of the best shows ever, really. I do love Dany, Jon, Arya, Tyrion- there are many relatable characters good and less good. :)
NSFF Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks for fav ^^ and greetings from Finland :)
flyin-penguins Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
please write a story about using a person's stomach as a kettle :)
Laogeodritt Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
staino Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012   Traditional Artist
:wave: Thanks for the watch :+devwatch:
wzupkid Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Hey what are you doing
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